LazySky
Ok I'm trying really hard here (harder than I should ever have to) to find something to give me hope about this but you're giving me nothing to work with sister Lily let a 5-year-old go out into a world where she was nearly raped literally a few days ago with no protection and no the fact he knows magic is no excuse for it because he can only use it 1 time before passing out and it doesn't help that I already have to ignore the fact that he talks like a 30 something-year-old man despite being 5
Wow.. That sister sure stupid for letting a 5 years old kid to travel alone, what kind of ***** that let a 5 years old go on a journey by himself?? Plus doesnt mc way too smart? He can even write a proper letter? This story sure become more and more bull**** by every chapters. Even if this is a fantasy story, pls make it atleast believable. Pls author dont rush things way to fast.
Woah so much hate going on in the comments... Guys, chill! You shouldn't ,in the first place, compare the situations in this novel with real life. It doesn't matter how old the kid is nor how mature he seemed. There could be underlying details that wasn't mentioned and as a reader, I believe that our imagination can handle that. I mean, do you really only imagine things word for word and not going beyond that? Why is it so hard to accept the unacceptable and fill in the details yourself? I think that it's what makes every story fun since it helps me use my brain think up of scenes and filling up the details on my own. Like being a part of the novel itself. All readers shouldn't limit oneself with what you can see/read...THINK. 😊
Umm.. Well is age really matter that much other novels has a lead who can talk at a few months old, can walk at 1 year old, cast magic at 2, and so on. Like this is a magical world so don't bound it to the rules of the mortals. Additionally he survived without eating, and is a new born baby, in the wild so FOR ME its not that strange to venture the world at 5....