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Comments of chapter undefined of Stronghold In The Apocalypse

Daoist1X1cCF
Daoist1X1cCFLv4Daoist1X1cCF

I think you need to think real hard about the personalities of your MC and his interactions.

Morvian
MorvianLv6Morvian

I don't know but I felt that this family is killjoy on this novel it seem!~ the irritating part huh?~

Angelxcx
AngelxcxLv5Angelxcx

This chapter is total bull****. I am starting regret that i read this novel.

DragonGodSmith3000
DragonGodSmith3000Lv13DragonGodSmith3000

I hope you fix that soon it’s a kinda weird family dynamic

Extant
ExtantLv13Extant

Bye... The main character feels fake.

Chan_Feng
Chan_FengLv14Chan_Feng

Well, this chapter killed the novel for me. It was painful to read and I can’t see myself reading much more.

Koooomakimi
KoooomakimiLv10Koooomakimi

Change huis personality, his whimpy character is annoying

Democratis
DemocratisLv10Democratis

Yeah I hope he can tow his spine some more cause if he gets any more henpecked I am out of here

Mile
MileLv6Mile

pls use this one " only for dialogue/or someone speaking n use this one ' when someone thinking!! its really confusing u use " for both speaking n thinking

PlatinumDragon11
PlatinumDragon11Lv14PlatinumDragon11

You know i never really liked that kinda family dynamic, i mean seriously i would have told my family to piss the **** off by now. It is ridiculous. I have read so many novels were the main character becomes strong and powerful but at home is treated like a door mat. It just really irks me can we not get a novel with a more calm and normal family dynamic but i guess it is authors choice.

Angor_Mike
Angor_MikeLv6Angor_Mike

Why is he reacting like that, it's so annoying. He's supposed to be all in charge of his own stronghold and he's stammering. It's annoying and embarassing.

MrPanda1994
MrPanda1994Lv14MrPanda1994

I'm sorry but the grammar is terrible in this story man, it needs some serious work I cant even read this.

ChayceMT
ChayceMTLv14ChayceMT

I'm wondering why there thoughts are " " and there dialogue as well, makes it confusing

00_darkness_00
00_darkness_00Lv1100_darkness_00

UNREADABLE, really the most annoying is authors who don't understand what they are writing....are u writing drama or fking comedy cuze that wasn't funny and no u don't behave like this if the world will end after 3 days.

Lonely_Prince
Lonely_PrinceLv4Lonely_Prince

one hack of stupid and painful chapter to read🐷🐖😑

DaoistSovereign
DaoistSovereignLv13DaoistSovereign

Scared of ur family bruh u need some balls

knight_faded
knight_fadedLv10knight_faded

faster update, sir. You must be serious.

BoostedKuroNeko
BoostedKuroNekoLv6BoostedKuroNeko

Thanks for the chapter

SIRI_NOVA10121999
SIRI_NOVA10121999Lv14SIRI_NOVA10121999

My idea of him acting like an accomplice of a terrorist organization sounds better than this by many folds.

El_Rasskull
El_RasskullLv4El_Rasskull

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