Internet's Dark Knight
I gotta say, an info dump about a random jungle and a wolf species is a bad way to start a novel. I actually lost interest and stopped reading. I’ll have to comback tomorrow and continue, though it’s fairly obvious what’s going to happen. Hopefully the rest of the novel is much better than this introduction.
The way the mc was so calm and unhurried would suggest he found the enemy a small fry and yet it took most the chapter to defeat it. Its like doing a bunch of maneuvers and evasions to defeat a group of goblins when it should take only one sword swing to defeat one or several at a time. I'm disappointed in the first chapter but I'll continue to read to see if it gets better.