Comments of chapter undefined of Number One Dungeon Supplier

Please don't turn this into a harem. I have a feeling that if you continue to tread this path, your novel will become part of the majority of the originals. Unenjoyable.

I tried my best D:

I like the actual story, the forced comedy is the only thing killing it for me..

Pepper remind me of Megumin… EXPLOSION!!!

I honestly like this more than some official books

Ok so 1. Personally I hate lolis 2. Plz don’t make all the bellators female 3. Also temperamental and abusive lolis are cliche in Japanese anything with a loli in it

sigh and this started out so good to i should have known that nothing last forever the systems personality was barely acceptable to begin with now that the mc has fully become her ***** i'm rapidly losing interest

please say the abusiveness gets better? i dont get why authors just decide its better when the female protags bully the mc, and the fact that he just takes it like a ***** both yun and the new loli.....

Ahem. Explosion!

Mother angle in this novel is starting to go down a disturbing road for me author san and it's very awkward tbh

This is getting close to Japanese beta mc. Pls don't go that way. When your slave attack you you do not act ad nothing happened. And the kowtowing....

flash news. never offend the one who holds the money of the house. haha

Not a fan of the end of this.. MC afraid of system that's also 'mom-like' is not fun to read.

I really dislike this system!!~

I'm still confused as to why he didnt go for the secondary mission since we now know he only got the cultivation technique by doing one so couldnt that mean he just lost out on an important reward forever because of that?

Author why? Just why? You are doing great with your idea of the MC aiming to be the no.1 dungeon supplier. How he will work hard to obtain more dungeon bosses etc and how he will thrive to grow his business. But why do you have to include an annoying system, forced comedy, a beta MC and cringey interactions? :(

It feels like the story took a hit in quality somewhere in the last few chapters... The grammar is no longer smooth and is very jarring to read. The forced cuteness is also starting to become irritating. It's obvious the characters are "cute" but please don't waste so many words repeating it. On the subject of cuteness. The initial ideas that made the core of the story made it very interesting. The only issue is, as the story moved along it became more and more cliche. The "super cute and sexy" helper, overemphasized to no end. The "weak and easily bullied" personality of the character. The fact that he's overpowered for his current power level due to "talent". I'm really hoping the last part was mostly because they were putting on a show, or the goblins were lower rank. Seriously though, if he ends up 1 shotting everything, you're going to lose any ******* when it comes to the MC. I'm not sure if you will be reading this at all considering it's on an older chapter. I'm just hoping you don't end up sacrificing quality of the story and punctuation for quality. Fewer high quality chapters will be much better in the long run. Please don't run this story into the ground by rushing.

EXPLOSION SECT gonna raid this chapter be careful PANDA SECT!

Oh god, oh no this is literally turning into Konosuba we have aqua, little explosive addicted idiot oh no, then that means theres going to be a masochistic knight as well

This story got ****ed the moment author decided to make the mc a beta ***** boy.