Comments of chapter undefined of Snake Reincarnation

like the story and idea, but small mistake you made. snakes don't have eyelids so he can't blink.

Thanks for the chapter! Looking forward to next chapter!

This damn good

I think the MC is way too religious and narrow minded. He was babbling days upon days of heaven, hell and god and of nothing else. Even after his mother said something about hatching out of his egg and being his mother he called her god. And then after realising he was reborn he was complaining about not being in heaven. I think this kind of religious kind of mindset is disgusting and it kind of ruined my fun at reading this chapter. But the plot and writing itself is kind of good, so I will give the second chapter a chance.

Nice work there are few spelling mistakes, and some minor grammatical errors.If you improve that your story should start off with a good start and a smooth one at that. Keep up the good work.

thanks for the chapter

What is going through my mind

thanks for the chapter

Good chapter

I love this!!!