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*knock* *knock* author still there? if so, i have an idea for future space magic spells. it's about curved space: hyperbolic dodge: two lines will diverge and never meet, everything will curve away from you, you are untouchable. euclidean aim: two lines will always meet, the projectile and the target will always meet/hit. since he has already grasped normal space, why not go over to curved space? it would suite him well, i think.
It's so sad there's no more chapters, this story is so good... It's grounded in reality just enough so as to not require a complete suspension of belief. Really sucks to be an artist, as the remuneration is often not enough to support the sustained effort of creating something beautiful from nothing.đ