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Comments of chapter undefined of Assassination System

A_Stevenson
A_StevensonLv14A_Stevenson

so they go to the empire that literally came to attack them? the same one where his wife was tormented? Then they bring their daughter to be the perfect hostage? so much wrong with the mc and his wife. they aren't good at schemes at all. I wouldn't trust them to plan a party 🤦‍♂️

Morvian
MorvianLv6Morvian

so far the title should be forgotten!~

H_IDE
H_IDELv5H_IDE

Hey this novel focus in assassination or lewdness

void893
void893Lv11void893

there's not much assassin stuff going on but i'm not complaining. i love the romance in here it's a sweet little love story. i wouldn't mind seeing more romances like this implemented into your new novel.

vezir33
vezir33Lv6vezir33

Title should be change to ''Assasssin can't stop pampering his wife''.

Malladi
MalladiLv14Malladi

I feel that the basic theme of the story is forgotten and going off tangentially into something else

FalgaGS
FalgaGSLv13FalgaGS

I was hoping it to be a harem haah but i guess not. It feels like we gonna have a long term romance. And can i be honest Author you are too fast in most of the plot related too the system and strangely ya give thorough details with the waifu and related plot. I dont know if you wanna expose the system later , but ya give me the vibe of some of those sadist authors who like to torture their readers with their plot but in the end giving a satisfying ending, quenching our rage lol.

Dflor
DflorLv12Dflor

The title should be “The Story how I conquered an MILF”

KarmaRetribution
KarmaRetributionLv3KarmaRetribution

let me guess the god of lightning "saved him", am i right?

ThunderGodsDescent
ThunderGodsDescentLv12ThunderGodsDescent

Wouldnt mind the lack of anything to to do with 'assasination' or 'system' in these few chapters if the romance was even half decent, its just a seemingly ***** girl being a *** slave for the MC, and this Idiotic horny-24 MC is getting worse every chapter.

BigBootyLover
BigBootyLoverLv5BigBootyLover

If this is a harem, having the milf and the kid will make it very awkward. If it isn't a harem, she needs to find some damn treasure, get lucky & become stronger. Hopefully you aren't a sadist and kill off the mom or some crap like some sicko authors

Jhova90
Jhova90Lv15Jhova90

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

1_step_closer
1_step_closerLv121_step_closer

Just try not to over do the romance but I'm just saying that's your choice since it's your novel and not mine.

zafer_gulu
zafer_guluLv5zafer_gulu

Thanks for chapter

EonElderDragon
EonElderDragonLv11EonElderDragon

Assassination System is the title and yet only been one assassination so far. Two if you count the guard but I don't that is just collateral. Yes been several uses of a system but when you look at it so far the story all though good doesn't fit the tittle

Blackflaem
BlackflaemLv14Blackflaem

Exp

Luis_Reyes_0352
Luis_Reyes_0352Lv5Luis_Reyes_0352

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Lannydar
LannydarLv14Lannydar

😁👍👍Thanks for the Work

Ziya_al
Ziya_alLv14Ziya_al

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Lw7
Lw7Lv4Lw7

Unless she dies.... This is gonna be too boring and what about the system