El_Don
Is there any reasonable reason why he didn’t kill his half-brother? I’m asking beacuse it seems like you employed plot-amor for “named” antagonists. It seems like he easily kills no-name guards that are stronger then him but as soon as someone who is relatively imporant to the game plot shows up they survive by some unbelievable stroke of luck (eg. the girl from previous chapter). By doing that it looks like the skills of MC are extremely inconsistent.
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