Comments of chapter undefined of The Mech Touch

The Mech Touch

Exlor

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skyz0blueLv14skyz0blue

‘Sigh, Exlor there is way too much fluff in the last 2 chapters. I couldn’t read half of it because it was so far removed from the point of these chapters OR you would repeat the same idea in multiple different ways too often. Like why did the bit about his children require 3 paragraphs or more? I dunno, im a dunny who hasnt written a book.

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specterblueLv3specterblue

its called filler

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IronHeartLv15IronHeart

Ves new book title. 101 ways of designing bio mechs what you can't learn.

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WarStrider72Lv15WarStrider72

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WarStrider72Lv15WarStrider72

how is Ves going to test the blood sharing system without a mech pilot? Will the system conjure one up?

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KixtiaLv15Kixtia

And that is how the great masters come. Under all the external influcies, they come with something original from their own making.

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Izuchukwu_101Lv13Izuchukwu_101

That is what I call original design solution!

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Lord_MaxwellLv15Lord_Maxwell

Gracias por el Capítulo!![img=update] Thanks for the Chapter!![img=update]

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WarStrider72Lv15WarStrider72

1st

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LycaionLv15Lycaion

i want ves next 3 kids to be baseline humans

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