Comments of chapter undefined of The Mech Touch

*looks at the footage* "Yep. Still looks like a light skirmisher to m-"*SLAP*

Enjoyable and nostalgic reading day for me. I very much enjoy how our author is enhancing the Mech creating process this time around. It’s even fresher because of Ves’s new toy adds a new dimension to the process. With the Mech Design Event running parallel, I get an even stronger sense of the design experience Ves, Gloriana and the design team are embarking on. I feel today’s chapter’s have raised the bar once again and I can only mark the occasion with a 4th star. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ It might appear I have lost my critical eye as I have been posting 4 plus stars several times recently. The novel has transitioned to this point that I can no longer find anything but good things to discuss. As of today, I am concluding my rating system. This novel lives up to the 5 star rating I issued it when I was captured by its initial chapters. The concept of Ves being an Anti-hero, with similarities to V, the character MC in the movie V is for Vendetta. Ves is pretty well fleshed out now, the only flaw is the understatement of his transhuman abilities. Last check, Ves Larkinson as of chapter 1749 read: Profession: Journeyman Mech Designer Specializations: Spiritual Man-Machine Symbiosis Design Points: 333,622 Attributes Strength: 1.6 Dexterity: 1.6 Endurance: 2.0 Intelligence: 2.2 Creativity: 2.1 Concentration: 2.1 Spirituality: 1.8 Neural Aptitude: F The average human is 1.0, slamming that work station engineered for normal structural capacity might not have buckled, in the standard gravity of the Scarlet Rose, loose objects might have gone flying, liquids splashed and the design teams of normals should definitely have a new impression of their BOSS! While this novel is not a romance novel by any means (thank you Exlor!), it’s starting to look obvious that other that the black sheep Realla, the further looks pretty bleak for even casual relationships. Now I understand why Carlos Shaw freaked out and quit the LMC when Ves and Gloriana became a couple. It’s just CREEPY and embarrassing to the rest of the characters 😳. Final critique which our author has really made a notable change in the last Mastery quest was the lack of PLOT ARMOUR. It made every paragraph a cliffhanger. Without a doubt in my opinion your best action write to date. The characters were excellent and very believable, even Gion’s betrayal and Ves/Rion’s use of ship board systems to overcome overwhelming odds was masterfull. I don’t profess to be a writer or have writiers skills, I just know what I like and I like The Mech Touch.

ves got 99 problems but a girl ain’t one

girl, girls and even more girls. I'm jealous

ANNOUNCEMENT: MECH DESIGN SUBMISSION CONTEST! The Mech Touch has reached 2000 chapters (in privilege), and that is a huge accomplishment! The Mech Design Submission Contest is not the same as the last contest. Instead of submitting characters to add to my story, you are now able to suggest MECHS to The Mech Touch! Suggest any ORIGINAL mech (no ripoffs from other books or shows!) that is suitable to be designed by Ves Larkinson and Gloriana Wodin! Suggest a commercial mech, a commissioned mech or a private mech! Submission Details This contest will run for 3 weeks from 18:00 CET, October 18 2020 to 18:00 CET November 8 2020. You can submit your original mech design to be added to The Mech Touch at: -The comments of Chapter 1958 on Webnovel -The comments of Chapter 2000 on Webnovel -The #events channel on The Mech Touch's Unofficial Discord server Before you submit, PLEASE read the rules and guidelines or there is a large chance your submission will be DISQUALIFIED. Rules -Only 1 submission per account. Multiple submissions from the same account will not be accepted. -The mech submission has to be a second-class or third-class mech that is PLAUSIBLE for Ves and Gloriana to design. -You can add technology that is not currently featured in the book as long as it isn't too overpowered or convoluted. Your submission will be disqualified if the technology is too overpowered or full of scientific terms! -Please post your mech design submission at one of the three locations I've mentioned above within the contest period. I will NOT accept submissions posted anywhere else! -DO NOT PLAGIARIZE OTHER ANIMES, BOOKS, TV SHOWS, MOVIES OR OTHER MEDIA! The Mech Touch is not fanfiction. It is an ORIGINAL story set in its own setting! IF YOU CAN'T COME UP WITH SOMETHING ORIGINAL, THEN DON'T BOTHER PARTICIPATING IN THIS CONTEST! GUIDELINES Treat this contest as an attempt to SELL a mech design of your own creation to a potential customer. What I mean by that is that you need to adopt the perspective of a marketer and a salesman. Do not make your sales pitch too long or complicated. If you just write a list of specifications without any explanation to tie it all together, then you failed. What I like the most are mech design submissions that have a story behind them. The story has to explain what need the mech is supposed to fulfill, which customers the mech is supposed to appeal to and how much value they add to an existing mech roster. DO NOT WRITE TOO MUCH! I don't have any patience to read a long and convoluted submission either. If you need more than 500 words to describe your mech, then you failed. Lastly, while it is enjoyable to focus on the strengths of your mech, don't make it too overpowered. I will not bend over backwards in order to incorporate an impractical mech design into my story!

If he plays his cards right and doesn't piss her off, Ves might gain a contact in a neighboring sector. A fellow Journeyman at that. When he finally gets around to selling mechs throughout the cluster, she might prove useful in filling orders Majestic Teal's buyers.

uh oh, who else feels like Gloriana is going to be Jealous????

thanks for the chapter

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first, exp!