Exlor
Nothing scares me more then a Pacifist & cloudy curtain has groups of them. Extremist Pacifists aswell. Need to purge these idiots..
Error 388: One peculiar nature about -> peculiar feature of (awkward phrasing) as he stood besides Melkor -> stood beside (tense) capital city in a full-blown -> city into a (awkward phrasing) their mechs embark from the -> mechs disembark (incorrect phrasing) least five mechs more -> least five more mechs (awkward phrasing) follow up upon -> follow up on (awkward phrasing) mech pilots follow suit -> pilots will follow suit (missing word) installed and control by -> installed and controlled by (tense) didn't look to worried -> didn't look too worried (to vs too) subsidiary of a faction from a second-rate state -> subsidiary of a second-rate state faction (poor phrasing)