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Comments of chapter undefined of The Mech Touch

Ray_paul
Ray_paulLv2Ray_paul

Nice

N0xiety
N0xietyLv7N0xiety

Now the security firm can spy on him. You are never safe from watchful eyes haha! It is best to invest in computer science and make your own robots if you truly wanna be safe...

Jubilee9000
Jubilee9000Lv3Jubilee9000

Should've totally went for 8 boosters so it could be an "octogon" :p

darkoneko
darkonekoLv6darkoneko

the Speed demon wouldn't perform too well on 1 vs 1 (too much rich of being pit against a medium or heavy mech), and there could be a lot of problem even on large map modes, since the armour is really too poor.

fndy
fndyLv14fndy

"computer nerd" Said the mech nerd

CreamPies
CreamPiesLv5CreamPies

wow, not many novels that I read has MC fail a "easy" task several arcs after doing it the first time... Nice, shows how people can make mistakes even with 'experiences'

Lucasestevescosta
LucasestevescostaLv5Lucasestevescosta

Thanks for the chapter. I think the Speed Demon os kind of cool. A shame he is not so good when talking about perfomance.

articcherry
articcherryLv11articcherry

I feel like the speed demon would be either the Ronnin or Northstar form titanfall 2.

don0808
don0808Lv15don0808

Good chapter.

eloheitzvaot
eloheitzvaotLv13eloheitzvaot

Thanks

Hendoxium
HendoxiumLv2Hendoxium

Should have added 8 boosters to make it an octo-gone! 😂

Shinn
ShinnLv15Shinn

lol

Tristero
TristeroLv14Tristero

I feel like the correct solution to the issue of overpenetration with the narrow spear is to make it a trident, which I suppose also fits the name in a Judeo-Christian social consciousness. In other news this is the first story for which I’ve felt compelled to comment. Excellent work. In terms of science fiction, you have great chops. I find just he narrative compelling, but I will say that outside of the webnovel format, you would benefit from a more streamlined narrative. The conflict so far has been palpable internal anxiety and formulaic competition-based. Again, in this format, you wouldn’t need to break out of that to compel your audience, but you clearly have the mind and skills to write for a larger audience and I’d love to see your books in stores. All things being equal, you’re several weight classes above any other author I’ve read in my descent into light novel addiction. Thank you for the story.

IRocks
IRocksLv11IRocks

Thanks for the chapters 🤠

CatHam
CatHamLv3CatHam

👍

ItMustBe
ItMustBeLv6ItMustBe

Thanks!!!

Brett_Anderson_1244
Brett_Anderson_1244Lv1Brett_Anderson_1244

He bouta get spied on

Masrit
MasritLv3Masrit

He should find out if he can upgrade to allow him to test his own mechs rather than just relying on the system. Could help him come up with new ideas.

Myrken
MyrkenLv3Myrken

It’s refreshing to read a book where the MC is aware of the help without needing to break the fourth wall

asiwajuomo
asiwajuomoLv6asiwajuomo

💕