Exlor
Just caught up. Im really loving this novel and i cant wait to see more. Your novel has amazing potential to be long running classic of the site in the future. I firmly believe its a lot better than most of the top originals right now.
@Exlor I'm really enjoying this novel. Just a small complaint. The devil lies in the details. But in your case you're focusing too much on the details. Sure the version numbers for an armor or component make it seem authentic, but actually detract from the plot as they don't really contribute much. Instead of saying Manufacturer X Component Y Version Z, just say armor from X industries or so. Readers won't remember version numbers and it's just padding at this point