Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto Fanfic: Just a Test

I like the story so far. The names of his team mates are rather hard to remember tough... Im not sure if you went for the least used names found online or made your own up, but they're almost evasive to my mind. So I do recommend using some easier to remember names for them. I also find the mc very passive about his training. He acts all cool about wanting to survive but there is no i dictator he did anything to up his chances by training... So that worries me a bit, especially combined with his team mates having such non memorable names... For future chapters, I recommend to get Jonin sensei for them with a name that is easy to remember, and a skillset that would benefit most Konoha Civilians... Fire Affinity, Weapons, Taijutsu, some genjutsu is the most generic skillset for Konoha, which so far seems to be what you're aiming for. So I recommend doing that along with a memorable name. Maybe give have the jonin carry a clan name, as clan ninja are much more likely to reach Jonin levels. I recommend Sarutobi, Shimura or Kurama depending on what skillset resonates best with your Jonin. Unless you ofcourse intend to use an existing character for it.