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Comments of chapter undefined of Battle of Ascension

Abasan
AbasanLv4Abasan

I’m only reading this for the challenge. So let’s just be honest. If you’re writing a character, be real. A 21yo who is so stupid, feels to me as if the author himself is a 10yr old

FreakReader21
FreakReader21Lv4FreakReader21

What hell is going on? Can you explain what the fukkk am here?? This flow going to more and more become bad-egg..

Hypnosxs
HypnosxsLv13Hypnosxs

are you going to ruin the novel with adding this *****?

EternalRest
EternalRestLv14EternalRest

Could this be the start of a lesbian affair? We now who has the biggest vagina!

EternalRest
EternalRestLv14EternalRest

Yea love when the author runs out of s**t to write about so he throws in some random garbage! Wish the bimbo’s spear ended this cowards life.

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loli_king
loli_kingLv5loli_king

Wa... Wait , what happen

XbsXbs
XbsXbsLv5XbsXbs

This novel is like a sweet voice in ur head saying “ kill yourself “ again again and again...

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Yazoy
YazoyLv3Yazoy

i beg mc a bit clever about the status and sp .. thanks for the chapter

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GodOfMenace
GodOfMenaceLv5GodOfMenace

wow he is getting married :P

Daoist_TinyTiger
Daoist_TinyTigerLv6Daoist_TinyTiger

Ok this chapter is where I officially stop reading this novel.. I've read many novels as you can see from my level in Webnovel and also from my comments in other novels. It's fair to say I've read many 'dumb' novels also but this is another low.. Normally there are certain conditions for "marry me or die" to happen, and they're mostly stupid but this is too much. I'm sure there are explanations if I choose to read on but word of advice, put some foreshadowing before this happens. I mean who in their right mind would say "marry me or die" at our fcking age. I mean although the setting of the world has changed into killing monsters but the people in this "novel" are assuming living in the 21st century like we are. There are just too many 'cancer inducing' scenes in this novel and I can't stand it anymore. And most importantly, I know the MC is not a genius, neither is he considered above average intelligent, but he doesn't need to be downright dumb. I can accept weak protagonist but not dumb ones. Doesn't matter if he was a spoiled brat before but as a 21-year-old, he should have common sense. So good luck to the rest of you but I'm out. Author great idea for the novel. It's interesting enough but please further improve your English skills and maybe produce a smarter MC next time. I can understand if MC is 12 but he's 21, so I expect a more mature and intelligent MC. And your side characters seem a bit dull from this new "Future wife" character. Maybe too early to judge but sorry, can't stand this MC any longer. Good Luck.

Morvian
MorvianLv6Morvian

whoa, the author is really the idiot one huh?? the heck with this idiot MC and forced romance with annoying woman??~

WinterFear
WinterFearLv5WinterFear

this shiit just ruined the novel.

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LazyDemon
LazyDemonLv7LazyDemon

the humanoid beast the best wingman first day already thinking about marrying

Omnipotentbeing
OmnipotentbeingLv4Omnipotentbeing

Lol where’s the elder, uncle or grandpa to slap the Mc with a palm move to kill him because this one actually needs one maybe he’d get smarter after being so close to death or would he just become stupid further

GodOfFamine
GodOfFamineLv4GodOfFamine

And.. Done

devilown
devilownLv5devilown

stupid and coward mc

Tkmeotpls7
Tkmeotpls7Lv13Tkmeotpls7

Blinking eyes blinking eyes eyes blinking n a daze. Misunderstanding life. Who am I where am I what have I read. Is the earth have I transmigrated to a realm where strange novels rule. Someone wake me. Where am I eyes blinking blinking eyes blinking eyes eyes blinking

pis
pisLv5pis

Sad life..a retard mc with the most stupid plot..and then there's 100's of 5 star reviews from fake account.. Fck this novel

Nydre
NydreLv13Nydre

Is this gonna be the 'you touched my scarf now we marry or i kill myswlf' bs?

Haiku575
Haiku575Lv6Haiku575

Please kill

Longshort
LongshortLv4Longshort

K I'm done with this **** This MC is beyond braindead and the spelling goes to **** even more