Comments of chapter undefined of Flowers Bloom from Battlefield

Uhmm, I just want to comment that you sometimes lack the prepositions or some words and the 's to show ownership 😊 but all is good 💕 There's room for improvement, goodluck!

First it's a good start... I like it... But I've noticed that ur using "are" instead of "were"... "Will" instead of "would or could"... Those things make the sentences to sound weird... The past have to be the past and future or present can't be used up if u wanna make the sentence in the 3rd face I'm not good at the English either so I don't know if I should've said anything... But better to say it then to regret later.. It's the advice from the friend and not the enemy (^o^) Good luck and do ur best ❤️❤️❤️

So problematic.

First two chapters and I’m hooked

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So the father was two timing? Then divorced/ killed her mother and promote the concubine And that Jun zhanxian is her grandpa right?

Like the story despite grammar errors

Mmmm

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So far ,ok.

Rereading this novel again! ♥️

Hmm the jun family is declining because of the emperor’s jealousy... he probably kept sending the jun family to battles or some must’ve been assasinated by other enemy 🤔

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I wanna thank the author for this wonderful story it's been 2yyears since I began reading this but I had too stop because of my work now I'm back again and I'm glad it's completed already 😃😃😃

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good novel writing 👍 all the best for other

Uh oh Is there going to be another 'kill the emperor' arc Because that's happening a lot