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Comments of chapter undefined of Hide and Seek(ongoing revision)

pragya_12072
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the book is just amazing and I am rereading it an year after. I found some grammatical errors but that's okay . I wish I could write this well 😁😁

Naru134
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Aw thanks, actually I know I need more improvement since I am an ******* writer. I hope you can write your own story, I really just wanted to share my ideas with others

abhijna09
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Curious to know what happens next

scsmith95
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I'm enjoying the chapters but I've noticed spelling/grammar mistakes?

LAmUEL
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interisting

saravana5
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Looks interesting

Ayeshaayu
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Exciting story

Dannyelle_Foster
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this was great but the wording in some places is bad. Other than that love this book so far hope for more

sweet_psychopath
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I love this one :)

Olulade_Useluv
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Hello

Tinalee_Martinez
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Great novel

Eris21
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I´m still curious about the age of this red hair girl.

scarletwitch95
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This is my favorite part of this chapter.

mjp_mjp
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This story is going too interesting

srush123
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Interesting

Isabella_55
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👍👍

Naveee4175
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Ya v interesting, hope her parents, believe her n leave the house before something bad happens...

Whaaaatt
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