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Comments of chapter undefined of Defying Natural Order with DeoxyriboNucleic Acid

ATiredReader
ATiredReaderLv4ATiredReader

I just wanted to say that the POV changes were very confusing. I really like your fast paced action, but I think the blocky writing makes it a bit hard to read. I really enjoy the concept right now, and I'm going to continue on the chapters. Ok see ya

DNOwithDNA
DNOwithDNAAuthorDNOwithDNA

First of all, thank you for your time. As for the POV changes, I struggled to just make it readable from my original version, and it's not a style of POV change I do anymore now, so you don't need to worry about it happening again.