i hope you accept constructive criticism or whatever they call that. tbh, the story is good, it has a promising plot, the pace of happenings is not too fast it was being laid out one by one. since this is not wattpad, fanfictions but a novel, i suggest avoit putting so much AN. in 4 chapters you have AN before the chap begins, in the middle and in tge end. apart from the one that the platform provides (Authors thoughts?) onlt that but overall with tge story is was superb. goodjob.
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