Vanlauredel
Dropping my review, despite only reading a chapter. The precise and short words used to describe the characters and the situation easily captivated me. It actually felt more of a paperback novel rather than a webnovel, it didnβt add any unnecessary words, it was clean and grammar wise, perfect. The premise of the story felt like sherlock holmes, though it is interesting it downplayed the story since it wasnβt completely an original especially since I read most of Arthur Doyleβs work. I hope this novel wonβt dissapoint, considering my high rating and expectation of this work.
Hello., author-san. This is my review as a fellow author hahaha. I really like the minimalist style of the way you broke the paragraphs since it would be easy to read. It wouldn't appear stocky. I also like the way you narrate what they are doing. Not a lot of complications and they are specific. it's kinda easy to imagine when it's direct and straightforward. You have sown intrigue from the first chapter and i love it.
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