Anas_Nazim
its a great read currently, i like tour writing style and i am excited to see what the future chapters have in hold for us to see and continue the great work. oh and i must say the idea eith the mc being a symbiote is quite interrsting and seems fun and will he change his vessels ir will he stay on the panther i personally think its better for him to change vessels but its your story
Writing Quality (5/5): Although there are some grammar errors, they're minor and doesn't affect the readers understanding in any way at all. Stability of Updates (5/5): A new chapter almost every single day. What can I do except giving this a 5/5? Story Development (5/5): It's really interesting seeing how Max interacts with the different Marvel characters, and how his actions change canon in a way that's really intriguing. Character Design (5/5): Max is honestly really lovable as he tries to protect everyone he holds dear, while pretty much not giving a sh*t about his enemies, or bad people. World Background (5/5): I mean, it's Marvel y'all. There's no reason for me to even give a reason as to why it's 5/5, except it's because it's marvel. Overall, this is probably one of my all-time favourite fanfics, especially since I love when the MC is non-human (and even more when their race is klyntar). This story is definitely one I would recommend to anyone that have even a small interest in Marvel.
I am not going to suger coat things, this story was not that good at the starting. But it gets better as the story progresses. If you want overpowered main character with a gundam PP. Look elsewhere. MC will make mistakes and deal with the consiquences, have limitations that he has to overcome. And this is a very slow paced story. So, you won't find any plot holes. Max who is the Main Character will be a Hero. Anti-Hero sometimes, but don't expect him to be far right a vilian. And this story has some grammatical issues. Not gonna lie writing is hard. And English isn't my first language. So if you find any errors point them out. I will fix the ASAP. And the main story will evolve around a few key Characters. Max, Shuri, Spiderman and the love interest will be the main cast. Max won't just jump around from hero to hero and gain their powers. Symbiotes doesn't work that way. But I can guarantee you he will be above Thor and Hulk when he deals with Thanos. But it will take time. If you are a Marvel Guru, good for you and point out my mistakes. But do it politely in a civilized manner. I don't owe any one anything. If you like my story, you can suggest it on the comments or discord. I will get back soon. But if you hate how I have written my story you are welcomed to criticize. It's my work nothing too much. But I am satisfied with it, I have seen far better stories and Fanfics. So nothing to be proud about.
Truth be told, I gave it another chance now knowing it's a Hero MC story, so my dislike of Hero MCs is out of it. Let's start with the fact that the MC in 100 chapter, changes almost nothing, and I mean he is the same good guy, impulsive, who likes to join people and befriends everyone, which is quite irritating, more when many times he acts like a fool, but in other parts he acts like an intelligent and objective person, which makes no sense at all, and seems like a way to just make the MC worse. Then I have another problem, the Ship of the MC x Felicia Hardy, my god, it's so bad, the part of the MC's crush is a rushed and out of context, it seems to me very forced his love for her and how SIMP he is, he literally looks like those Nerd who watch Streamers and send them money waiting for their greeting like virgins, now on the other hand how Felicia takes things I like, her development in the story seems to me machismo better than the MC's. So the truth is, the only problem I have with this story and its mistakes is with the MC, it seems like it was written badly to make it better with time, but it never gets better, which is very annoying, except for those who like MC's that seem like the average protagonist of an Isekai. XD The rest in the story is very good, the updates, the grammar, the world background is very well done actually, and the other characters in the Fanfic are good too, but since the story focuses on the MC and his hosts, the story development also gets about 2 stars. But taking out the MC of the Fanfic, the rest is very well done, I like in general everything that happens.
Just reviewing while waiting for a new Chapter Release. I've been thinking Author. How would he ( Your MC ) react to the Vibranium Suit ( Golden Jaguer or Black Panther ) Or even Nano Particles in General. Will he have a Solid self substaining body then? The Nano Particles or Nanites might be able to build him a Body. *Whisper* Will he f*ck Ororo under T' Challa's Nose? Also Can you write T'Challa's name like this? This is the correct way to write it. The ' T ' is kind of like a Family Name. So when you write it, both 'T ' and the first letter of his Actual name has to be in Capital letter.
-MC is a Symbiote with additional Abilities to help gain more power. -Grammar and Spelling is Great and Understandable. -Early Chapters/Story is not that good but not too bad. -MC's IQ is often times unstable during the early part of the story through the middle and gets clearer overtime. -Description of MC's appearance is almost non-existent sometimes and only being mentioned if seen by other people or if being narrated from 3rd POV. -Would be better is they now MC is an alien in my opinion since personally do not like being called an inferior creature like a mutant if he is a superior alien lifeform(Opinion Only). -Story gets a little confusong sometimes. -MC gets underestimated most of the time but does not mind it. -Would be better if MC was a little more prideful of his species rather than hiding it from other weaker people(Opinion Only) *Overall Great Read but short chaps. MC's personality and attitude is good but sometimes it does not fit my cup of tea. Story Progress/Development is Understanable but confusong at times* (Suggest defining MC more-Appearance in Human and Symbiote form or Hybrid Form. Being confident in his own species rather than hiding it most of the time from weaker people. Understandable story despite the definition being "Tendril this Tendril that" in fight scenes it makes it a little boring with my imagination needing a more definite explanation) -Still a Good Read-
very good please continue dont drop like last one please do more please do more please do more please do more please do more please do more pl p v please do more please do more please do more v please do more please do morelease do moreease do more please do more please do more please do moreplease do more please do more please do more please do more please do more
This was a great series. It's sad that it's gone now. I was looking forward of what was to come up next. Author if your seeing this, please revive this series. I admit it is selfish of me to say that. You do have a life outside of this, but taking away all the chapters. It's sad. Though it's my problem, you made your choice and I should respect that. Either way, I hope your doing Great Man.
so many events to take advantage of but he never actually takes part directly. so much potential wasted. he just seems to be a host for the author instead of an actual character in the story so it never actually gets to exciting or emotionally engaging at all. still not a bad story just isn't quite delivering as well as it should on the follow through. he's as gone as quick as he showed up. rarely a friend made and his only true developing identity is that of a symbiote and its evolution. writing quality is good, updating consistency is also good. overall a decent story with a unique view.
Anti-hero and Hero tags??? Can someone explain me what is going on, I try to read for Anti-hero tag then I saw hero tag then I thought lets give it a try then in chapter 2 I saw he is not evil MC (author said this) and can someone please tell me who is romance partner, I am curious because he not human MC so Maybe I can try to read for romance. (Even if he is not Evil or Anti-hero MC I can read as long as he not Beta p**sy ass MC) Thanks for reading.