Suggestions

So I just wanted to see some of your suggestions for the rewrite, I have few of my own,

1) Improving the Length of the chapters to 3k-4k words

2) Pacing the story to be faster,

So for your suggestions,

1) System powers: Like if you want the three system to remain the same or the removing a subsystem.

2) World building: Would you want others species to be introduced or not. some other changes

3) Other changes ->