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(I Stole and re-wrote)Naruto: Kokushibo Template System

Original novel by Demon_Asmodeo (https://www.webnovel.com/profile/4318777614?appId=10) Orignal novels Synopsis: 'Obtain the First Upper Moon Template and reincarnate in the world of Naruto to reach the pinnacle of the sword and rule in the world of Naruto.' I am re-writing someones novel without asking so I'm letting you all know that; I lay claim to no credit for anything but what I changed to order to fix mistakes I had notice while reading the original. After all, I'm only doing this to improve my own proofreading skills and make the original fanfic better as it has a lot of mistakes in its grammar and spelling.

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Chapter 5-Akatsuki conflict against The Upper Moon part 3

"That is enough, this will hold him"-Pain stated looking upon the giant stone sphere floating in the air. The other members of Akatsuki could only look at the sphere with surprise, None of them expect for Konan knew of Pain's true power.

However, before everyone could calm down the sphere begin to shake. Slowly picking up speed as it became visually cracked and debris begin to fall from the sphere.

"Hey, It's meant to do that right?"-Sasori asked, looking at the sphere which held the person who almost took his head. But much to his growing horror, His leader remain silent.

Sphere started to expel crescent moons from all directions. Seemly bursting from within.

"Huh, I did not expect this."- Pain said with some surprise in his voice that was hidden from his otherwise stoic face.

The crescent moons seem to form a dragon's tail as it continued to burst out of the sphere and rip apart its surroundings.

Although there was a lot of damage done to sphere, Naruto was still only partly visible to outsiders. Naruto, using the natural ability of demons to change their body, had changed his own form so that many swords were emerging from his body.

'I didn't want to resort to this...But that guy with the ringed eyes is a bigger problem than I thought.'-Naruto thinks to himself, His eyes fulled with nothing but annoyance at the rinnegan user.

An army of clay birds started their second approach towards the swordsman, only to be sliced without Naruto moving an inch.

Naruto then begin to accumulate chakra in his legs while taking a deep breath. The oxygen seemly empowering him, before he preformed a single jump. Like a hot knife going straight through butter, Naruto destroy the remain parts of the sphere that blocked his path to his would-be recruiters, though each of them are highly skilled shinobi. Needing only seconds to be ready to receive him.

Naruto fell to the floor in front of them generating a large crater, only taking a second before shooting out again to the four ninjas. Naruto begin to make slices towards them with swords coming from his body. But in order to slow him down, Konan and Itachi started a grand assault of Shuriken and Kunai.

Pain had internally decided to use another 'Shinra Tensei' to keep Kokushibo(The name Naruto told them to call him) at bay, as he approached them with great speed, However, before he could make his move, he had to dodge a swarm of moon shaped slashes that had appeared around him.

*"Ninth form: Lunar Descent -endless lunar landscape"* was the only words of warning that came from Naruto's mouth as with a single movement of his sword, Hundreds of moon-shaped cuts begin to appear, surrounding the four Akatsuki members in front of him.

The four ninjas had then begin to dodge each cut and moons that followed them, with sasori blocking the cuts with the iron sand only to become surprised as he could see that Kokushibo now stood in front of him. The orange-reddish katana was approaching its mark.

Sasori was afraid of the six-eyed demon as his life could be ended with a single cut.

Some things were changed from the origin, But all in all I like how this is going. It's kinda fun writing, even if all i'm doing is proof-reading someone elses work.

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