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The story is awesome as well as the plot. The author described things very clearly and i loved the why this story starts One recommendation to the author, i have seen you writing few words with the star mark (*) insted try by adding a first chapter for certain meaning of few world and then write the novel. because it's confusing for a reader of he/she reads a word with a star mark, and if he/she know the word it became frustrating Looking forward to next chapters 😊

Good Plot:✅ Updating stability:✅ tempo:✅ story:✅ overall it's good. check out guys.

I've had to go over this story a couple of times and also did a little research into the religious setting you're going with, and I've got to say it's been really good so far, the grammar is great, a good storyline and it really does well to captivate one's attention.

The story has potential. Great character build. Set in a very diverse country too. The storyline is what makes this interesting. Also something unique and not that bland. I love overpowered MC's, soo this is my type. I hope you make it more fun. I would love to see some setbacks and stuff to make the mc more powerful. Keep on writing....

the character development is right but the only problem is that it's slow paced if you can make it better on that part this novel would become more better, continue doing your good work. I love it.

A great start. Has great potential too. The character and thoughts are greatly detailed. Looking forward to updates. Good Work Author!! . . Just that its a bit slow in the beginning

Great Novel! Have been following it from the beginning. Has a great start and has potential. Looking forward to the next chapters. Keep up the good work.

I like the details, plus good job on putting glossary at the end of the chapter, it helps a lot for readers like me who are not familiar with the terms

Loving the story Even though it feels a little slow, the storyline is what makes this interesting. Although there are many different stories, based on different mythologies, a story from Indian mythology is very rare and that makes it unique. With all the different terms that are used in the story, it gives a fresh feel. I'm not really a fan of arrogant Mc's but it makes sense when someone is invincible. Give it a try with a little patience, you won't be disappointed.

I like it. It's really good. But I have this kind of pet peeve where people just speed the things. On the last few lines, I'll be honest, I'd probably write it so that while the character is walking to the room, he is also thinking. But that's my opinion. Overall, I love the story. Keep up the good work. 🙂

this has a really nice background plotline considering it contains elements of religious myths. with your own creative manipulation that steers alot of spiritual elements left to right. but i just feel like there's way too many characters and names that i can't seem to remember throughout. for example explaining real life hindu worship elements that have different names to define them. Its like I'm reading someones autobiography, not fantasy fiction. Infact this can be classified a isegai in a much parallel perspective. I like the storyline build up though, maybe try removing namely elements that can confuse readers sometimes. keep it up!

Beautiful suspense at the beginning. Shows that it is bound to get interesting as the story proceeds. Loved the chapters at the moment. Let's see whats more to offer. I would love too see the MC flexing his powers.

Wow! The characters are well-written. The prologue is amazing, but the problem for me is that I'm not very familiar with Hindu mythology, so I've been searching stuff while reading. Also, the character names are a bit difficult for me to remember, but it works really nicely. I love it!

The story is good and can keep your attention while reading it. Enough mystery is there too. Characters are fun especially Adi and Amara. Update stability is great too. I would look to suggest author to write character's physical appearance more vividly. I still don't know how Amara looks or if she's Indian or foreigner from that name. Or maybe I just missed reading that part? Anyway keep it up author.

Second review here. Cuz Ig it deserves it and the author needs support too. Great storyline till date. Waiting for system to activate an the future glimpse shown in the beginning is also great. The story is moving a bit slow for now. But according to what Author said, it will move faster after chapter 30 - 40 and I'm sure that it will get more interesting. Looking forward to the updates, everyday.

Everything is great, from the grammar to the story line. It is a work of art which shows just how much the author put into it, keep it up and I expect more chapters like the current ones.

Just WoW 😃 Ngl the concept with which the author tells the tale is very descriptive with qualitative grammar. Adding glossaries help non familiar readers. It's just very interesting, tvbh. More chapters author.

The book has very good grammar, so far I haven’t spotted any errors, which is pretty common for new writers, the story is very interesting engaging, and has a generic unique idea. It kind of reminds of a cultivation novel, but with fantasy.

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