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[DROPPED] God of genjutsu

[DROPPED] God accidentally kill a guy with good karma in an extremely painful way. So he decides to let the guy choose if he wants to go to heaven or reincarnate. [I DO NOT own picture if the creator wants me to change picture I will.] [First time writer.] [Writing for fun.] [English is not my first language.] [Constructive criticisms, suggestions and feedbacks are appreciated.] [This is a work of fiction that draws heavily upon the original source material 'Naruto', created by Masashi Kishimoto and its anime adaptations. Please support the official release and know that I claim no ownership or credit regarding the existence of pre-existing characters or content related to the series. The only things I own are the original characters and the altered storyline.]

SilverSerpent · Anime & Comics
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Amateur

This chapter is just to tell you all I have never wrote a novel before, and I would like you all to comment anything you may see as helpful (Grammar issuses, Future plot, badly structured.) So that I can fix those mistakes, because I don't have a editor or proof reader or really anyone else. I am just a guy who chose to write a story. Any help is appreciated and I thank you all in advance.