Such an amazing start! I love the author's other novel too, but I think I may grow to like this one even more!!! I hope this one can be updated soon! But for now I'll patiently wait until this gem is polished and released to the world for us to admire and praise! Thank you for an amazing story, love your eternal fan!
Firstly, the writing quality is above average, the humour being a nice touch. Secondly, The story developent is amazing, alrhough background and description of the surrounding area as well as shock factor from transmigration can be improved. Since my second point comes close to the subject of world building, I will address the world background. Although the qi and spiritual points were addressed, I feel like explanations on the jobs of shaman can be addressed too. Additional information on different qi levels could be addresed so as to know the setting (ie. cultivation world) better. Elaborating on the positions in the sect which XY’s father is the head of would be great too. Different creatures and the grading of items can also be elaborated on. Since world background also touches o character design, this webnovel is quite good at that. Although, as with any other webnovel, there are some slight problems in understanding the charaxter of XY’s siblings and who is eldest, et cetera. Lastly, UPDATING STABILITY. If you came for chapters, mass releases and similar, you will be disappointed. This book has not updated in 5 months (at this time) and most likely will not update for a long time. I pray that the author will release more chapters soon. AHHHH, who the hell am I kidding. I am doing this on my phone a week after GRADUATING EXAMS. I AM BEGGING RHE AUTHOR, PLEASE UPDATE FOR MY SANITY, THIS BOOK IS *GNIQUF* AMAZING SO... .dlrow siht quF
I think it's really good! As many others have said, it has great potential. I think the plot is really intriguing and I really look forward to seeing more of this story, but I just saw that this was last updated two years ago? qwq.. Author-nim, you can't just leave like this ah!! You can't just create such a nice story with great potential and then leave, that's just breaking my heart... I beg you, please continue this story, orz.