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[Ben 10] Omnivers:Reborn Branch

Max Turner wakes up in the body of Ben Tennyson, As he grapples with newfound realities and faces immediate threats, Professor Paradox appears, revealing that Max has crossed into a parallel branch of the main Primus world. Max, now in Ben's shoes, must navigate the complexities of being a hero while unraveling the mysteries of this alternate reality.

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Sorry, this is not a chapter.

Hey, I was leveling up my writing, studying, and writing and learning on where can i improves, and what do i have to plan, what to do?

i did learn some tips and advise. And i looked back at this writing, And it not that goods, because it has no plots, no good timeline and characters, 

So i was thinking to rewrite this writing and change the whole.

I want to change, to that a character that got reincarnated into Ben 10:Alien Force all the way to Ultimate Alien Force. He is kleptomaniac, stealing values, shiny items in. And he got a system, maybe...? 

He is going around stealing all the thing that is shiny, from galaxy to galaxy, planets to planets.

So what do you think? Should I?

Please let me know, Thank you.

My regard, The Segnis.