57 [Rewrite]

This story will get a rewrite. I am unhappy about what happened with this story. I really enjoyed it but because I let myself be influenced by comments and readers, I lost interest for a while. Then I wanted to resume the story and finish Bleach as fast as possible but that didn't work out so well, because it was a bit chaotic.

The fight with Kenpachi and the commentary of the Superstar fight were things I had planned and written in advance and I really liked those chapters. But my idiocy of listening to readers have killed this story. I am sad about that. But I'll try to rewrite some parts and then publish it when I feel like it is better.

I won't change much. But I'll change the time he spends in One Piece. That wasn't smart. I wrote myself against a corner there. I had something completely different planned acutally. I understand the problem with having a character that is this powerful makes the story suffer if he doesn't have times when he can use that power against stronger opponents. So that will change.

I hope those that enjoyed the story will read it when it is better.

Cheers.